,.*`Mujhay Sonay nahi dayti,.*`,.

[ASK Afridi]

Re: ,.*`Mujhay Sonay nahi dayti,.*`,.

verey nice Gul Sis.
shogeeray(rattjagay) ziada mat kia karain sehat k liye achay nahin.
God Bless U...........

[shummu]

Re: ,.*`Mujhay Sonay nahi dayti,.*`,.

wah bahut umda nazm..daad pesh hai Gul jee...

[Gul]

Re: ,.*`Mujhay Sonay nahi dayti,.*`,.

Buhat nawazish !!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Fitna Dil]

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good.work

[thefire1]

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Waah bohat khoob, afsoos kay baRi deer say aap ki likhi gayi yeh nazm paRhee magar khushi yeh hay kay issay miss nahin kia :) kia karoon abhi tak iss site ko discover hi kar raha hoon kabhi kahan jhankta hoon kabhi kahan... khair...

Maazi say pashemaan hokar haal ko bayan karti hoyee yeh nazm waqayi qabil-e-tehseen hay, bohat khoob.

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ,.*`Mujhay Sonay nahi dayti,.*`,.

Bahot khoobsurat poem likhi hai aap ne really zabrdast

[Yaaram]

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Thori deir ho gayi aap ki is nazm ko parhny main

Gul ! jahaN tak meri adna soch hay us ke mutabiq to mujhey aap ki yeh nazm bohat pasand aayi hay - rawangi - ilfaz ka chunao - rhythm - human feelings ko aap ne bohat kamal maharat se chand ilfaaz main samonay ki bharpoor aur bohat achi koshish ki hay - mujhey aap ki nazm main images bohat kam nazar aaye hain - aik 2 misroN main images ne rang bhary - phir utni hi taazgi ka ehsaas baqi nazm main keu nai hua??

[Gul]

Re: ,.*`Mujhay Sonay nahi dayti,.*`,.

Thori deir ho gayi aap ki is nazm ko parhny main

Gul ! jahaN tak meri adna soch hay us ke mutabiq to mujhey aap ki yeh nazm bohat pasand aayi hay - rawangi - ilfaz ka chunao - rhythm - human feelings ko aap ne bohat kamal maharat se chand ilfaaz main samonay ki bharpoor aur bohat achi koshish ki hay - mujhey aap ki nazm main images bohat kam nazar aaye hain - aik 2 misroN main images ne rang bhary - phir utni hi taazgi ka ehsaas baqi nazm main keu nai hua??

Assalam O alaikum

Sab se pehlay tu aap apna taaruf kar dein tu
meray liyay convenient rehay gaa

anyway .....

yeh nazm jab likhi gaii umm may b 5 yeas back
tu lamhoun ki garift mein jo Haroof aa-ay
jo ehsass ki amaaj-gah banay ....
Onn ko hee alfaaz mein samoya

ab..koi alfaz ya ehssas aap k zehan per kia mqash kartay hein
yeh tu individual soach hai

kia hum kissi per wo taasur qaim kar saktay hein
jiss k zer-e asar hum khud rehtay hein??

:) adnaan( I think yehi aap ka nam hai jab k mujhay address karnay ka style wo nahi jo aap rakhtay hein )

zindgee ka matlab har aik k liyay mukhtalif hota hai !!!

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: ,.*`Mujhay Sonay nahi dayti,.*`,.

simply superb

[ahsaas]

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Nice ..zaberdast ..:)

[maria abbasi]

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gul munasib nazm kahi aap ney....
sunehrey "masoom" se wo rang?
ye misra bewazn ha ,,, zara dekh len..

[fayyazkhan]

Re: ,.*`Mujhay Sonay nahi dayti,.*`,.

My Own !

گُلِ جی آپ کی نطم بہت اچھی لگی خوبصورت الفاط کا چناءو کیا ہے آپ نے۔

[life.]

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Very nice -

[I Am In Love]

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Wah Kia Baat Hay
Bohat Khoob
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